Thursday, January 27, 2011

People reponsible for Margot's treatment

I think that there are two person that are both responsible for Margot's treatment. The first person is William, who is the person that directly caused Margot's suffering. William gave the signal to his friends to start bullying Margot, ad he was the person that gave the idea of trapping Margot in a closet before the teacher arrives so that Margot would not be able to see and enjoy the sun after five years of waiting. The second person that should be responsible for Margot's treatment is the teacher, who indirectly caused Margot's suffering. First of all, the teacher did not pay attention to Margot and went away while Margot was with the other children. She should have noticed from the behaviour of the children that they dislike Margot, and should have know that Margot might be bullied, but, she failed to realise that fact and failed to be a responsible teacher. This was a strong reason that caused Margot's suffering. In addition, as a teacher, she should have taught the children not to bully other people, and also to teach the children to accept others, but she did not do it either. Lastly, before she left with the children, she did not bother to check personally to see if anyone was missing, and thus did not notice that Margot was missing and that Margot had been bullied. As a result, the teacher should be responsible for Margot's treatment.

If I were one of the children......

If I were one of the children, I would wait until William and his friends had left, before going to the closet and release Margot from the closet. This is to prevent William and his friends from locking me into the closet in order to prevent me from telling the teacher about what they had done. Then, I would comfort her, so as to let her fell so scared and angry. Then, I would accompany her to the teacher and tell the teacher about what had happened. The teacher would probably punish the boys severely as depriving a person in venus from seeing the sun should be a big offence, as people get to watch the sun once in seven years. The boys would probably learn their lesson and stop bullying Margot. In addition, Margot will also get to see and feel the sun as I had saved her before the sun was covered by clouds again. Thus, the ending to the story will be positive.

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